day tripper

Im not sure about this. I can't really say I liked it, but I can't really say I dis-liked it. I think the problem was that the Chapter's story line ...

Guyssss. this is all found out in part twoooooooo (: thank you a lot for the reviews. Like A bunch. I know its kind of harsh (And yes there is ...

WARNING: This short story contains strong language, sex, drug usage, and boy on boy. You've been warned. I HAVE NOT EDITED THE FIRST PART, BUT I HAVE ADDED MORE TO ...

Well, this was mismatched to me. This is a short story, yes, but that doesnt mean it has to be SHORT. You know? This definitly needs more detail and explanation. ...

HAHAH omg. i loved the reviews. Guys Im a romance writer like crazy this was a goofy thing that I wrote in like five minutes because peyton and i are ...

Thankss:D

WHOA KAT THANK YOU. I completely forgot about this! Eek... that's kind of bad.hahaha I shall start writing Part Four soon;D hehe thanks for the review!

Thank you vury much(:

...this was done on the computer? Wow, amazing job. It looks like an oil painting! the only problem is that the boy looks oddly strange to me, but it's not ...

This is very neat. There are specks in the eye which give it that vampire feel. And I agree, it does look like a a moon in the pupil! vury ...

Hermm, this was vury good:D But, the only two problems I have are that 1) her hand looks either a little too blocky or her nuckles lining is too... straight. ...

The energy and perspective in this was amazing. Possibly because I feel the exact, exact, exact, EXACT same way.(: I think this is one of those stories where you have ...

*Dances around excitedly* Woo! After weeks and weeks of writers block, I've finally done it!:D This chapter needs lots and lots of work because I'm unsure about a lot of ...

Oh don't worry I'm not! I'm actually writing some of Chapter 7 right now. I plan on have between 12-16 chapters of this story so it's no where near finished ...

Ailam! Thanks for the little note in the begining. YER WELCOME by the way:D I really liked this. You really didnt have anything wrong accept a few typos(: "it was ...